Comments for Gloria's Blog

Comment on [insert synonym for respond] by Grace Yin

Grace Yin — Thu, 05 Nov 2020 04:41:16 +0000

In reply to David. Do I also have that part of your DNA

Comment on [insert synonym for respond] by David

David — Thu, 05 Nov 2020 00:49:07 +0000

You are right. You can replace the word “think” by “believe”.
I believe my DNA of smartness is with you.

I have a faith on you. You will be a freshman next year. There is just something you have to do to finish it.

Comment on just another year – 2019 by Gloria ✧*･✧

Gloria ✧*･✧ — Thu, 02 Jan 2020 23:09:14 +0000

In reply to Grace Yin. lol thanks for noticing. i'm gonna keep it this way. u flew. yes.

Comment on just another year – 2019 by Grace Yin

Grace Yin — Thu, 02 Jan 2020 02:54:33 +0000

(nice typos) my fav part is every instance of “my sister flew” because it makes me laugh.

Comment on not at all late by David Yin

David Yin — Mon, 07 Oct 2019 23:28:17 +0000

You are growing, so does your site.
I build the blog for you when you just know how to read and write. The initial idea is to let you get a habit of writing. And also knows what is appropriate content for public publishing.

Now it is time for yourself to make a decision of the future of the site. Maybe keep it as an archive, take it down, make it a personal portfolio, etc.
I can help you when you have a thought.

Same to Grace.

Comment on not at all late by 大少爷

大少爷 — Mon, 24 Jun 2019 09:02:56 +0000

i, too, have passed. every year. :’)

Comment on what if i didn’t write by Ivy

Ivy — Mon, 14 Dec 2015 04:56:42 +0000

If we used American currency the economy would be better.

Comment on marshmallow coats by Gloria ✧*･✧

Gloria ✧*･✧ — Mon, 07 Dec 2015 23:24:16 +0000

In reply to Vanusha. it could be...

Comment on marshmallow coats by Vanusha

Vanusha — Sun, 06 Dec 2015 07:15:58 +0000

Was the marshmallow Sophia? xD

Comment on i need..? by Carol Li

Carol Li — Sun, 20 Sep 2015 23:15:02 +0000

hi, gloria!

i initially wasn’t going to comment—i found my way here after trying to navigate grace’s wp blog—but i realized that this may be a field i could assist you in.

i remember grade seven, aha, writing stories with plot and all that. to know ms. cera, she doesn’t expect a convoluted one; the easy solution is, simply put, take the qualities/flaws of the characters and correlate it with the setting to get to your (predetermined?) ending. it’s great that you already have an ending! you just need to use your setting and the perks of your characters to shape it there.

a good setting usually has some characteristic ‘oomph’ that is manipulated to make the story more memorable (eg. the matrix, and how humans being in the custody of the machines was the /setting/). from thereon, you can begin to build your plot.

remember to always ask why; having a motive for your characters usually gives a plot on its own. by the end of the story, your characters should not be the same person they were in the beginning of the story.

i hope this helped, aha. not sure if it made much sense, though. good luck in writing your story! and remember to use a lot of writing devices (to make ms. cera happy orz)!